Thoughts on a title?
Also, do the characters seem off to you all? My editors says that something is just wrong. Please comment.
Rathos, a [General] with an enormous repertoire of skills, sulks over the edge atop Sanoval's wall. He stares downward, watching as the last of the fires outside the city are dealt with. He also constantly glances out into the distance, expecting the perpetrator to return. It is a possibility, on...