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Chapter 111:

Wounds cover her body. Some are old, having long turned into scars, but most are recent. But she ignores them as she calls upon her mana and creates an enormous windstorm that only her kind can maneuver in. The [Gale Wyverns] are unaffected, taking the opportunity to attack the [Blaze Wyverns] t...

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Prana

Hello ! Just finished reading and I think The MC hasen't spent as much time innovating as he should. I mean he is 9000 years old with many strange ideas he could make skeleton musiciens to make a concerto, enchant bones to explode when activating corps explosion and make it more powerful or even use his magic to craft bone armor that can protect it's owner!

QuasiEludo

That is absolutely true. The MC needs more time to experiment. Which is also a bit of a problem. If you remember, the dungeon itself is getting more and more dangerous. The average level is increasing overall. He has to conquer the dungeon before it becomes too dangerous for the other species to survive.

Prana

Yes but you skipt months in some levels of the dungeon so he could have tried some things. At least I KNOW I'd try to enchant the summoned musical instruments to see if mana made objects can take it or even become permanent