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Was it enjoyable?
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Wounds cover her body. Some are old, having long turned into scars, but most are recent. But she ignores them as she calls upon her mana and creates an enormous windstorm that only her kind can maneuver in. The [Gale Wyverns] are unaffected, taking the opportunity to attack the [Blaze Wyverns] t...