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Research About Me - Fancomic - Page 02 (Patreon)

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2018-09-14 20:39:27
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2024-02
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 Im excited to announce this ❤🤭

*Sweeties English is not my first language, so If you see any grammatical mistake, it will be highly appresiated if you point any grammar mistake for me!**

Also this is a Patreon Early access exclusive view guys :) please do not distibute or share with anybody YET! 🙌❤

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Sherrie Mora

aaw poor brainstorm! talking about emotions isn't easy ^^ and I noted some grammar issues ^^ "But no" should be "But not"; "someone have ever" should be "someone has ever"; "incredible" should be "incredibly"; "begging" should be beginning"; removed "of" so it reads "but you are (sorta) brilliant"; and change the last sentence to "would you please, at least, consider what I told you?" even if English isn't ur first language ur doing a good job here :)

ErikaSkerzz
>>15505370

Thank you so much for the corrections sweety! I changed everything up 💕 I think I may post the dialogs first then post everything correctlyone the page is completally done to not spoil the draws with the dialogs TvT thank you so much ror your patience