Page 1 revamp test (Patreon)

There was a significant amount of time I stopped working on this comic between pages 8 and 9. So much so I wasn't sure the first 8 pages would old up to the rest. 

So I did a little test, I do like how the newer one on the right looks. But not sure if I should spend the time updating all first 8 pages.

What do you all think?