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Alright that should be it. I've probably started the editing process on Monday but I don't think there's much I need to worry about for the first few chapters. However, I do think there are a few pacing issues in the book. So...

Comments:

- anything felt off? 

- any plot holes?

- do you want me to expand on any particular area? Particular scene? I think one more time in the Questors office would be cool. But I need to make sure it doesn't mess with the pacing. Then again, pacing is something I need to fix.

- Pacing - anything seem too fast? Anthing too slow?

- Foreshadow. I thin I did an okay job at foreshadowing the last fight. I think I might need a little more work, but not much. Thoughts? Anything really surprise you (in a bad way)?