Comic rewriting (Patreon)

Ok, so changes the comic (just left the first few pages), the older one should be a part two, this one would be about how Childe finds Bennett camping and tells him about a way how to get shelter and supplies during a storm, Bennett wants to learn his ways, but they need to prepare first. They go by the river side and Bennett has to get naked, Childe starts expecting Bennetts butt, starts licking it. Bennett gets hard and this is the part where I decided to keep the big peepee Bennett from my older drawing lol xd, Childe is surprised, but they continue on, he fingers Bennett but he's still too tight, so Childe gets a slime and lubes him up. Then he's like "ok, lets take a brake" but Bennett wants to continue :x, so Childe does that.
Then they do the WooHoo with Childe f-ing Bennett, also because Bennett is so big he starts sucking him self and comes in his own mouth xd

What you thing? Its 33 pages, the I could draw the part two where they go with the treasure hoarders haha

Also what style should I use, the one I did for Aether x Albedo comic, the one for my oc's, or try something in between, with black lines, but full shading?