DOA Stories: Marie Rose & Honoka #1 (Patreon)

Here's the first story I made. Remember to send me you Pixiv username or ID (the one on the URL) so I can send you the request for My Pixiv. Also it's important to me that you leave  your opinion about the story so I can get better.

Story:

https://www.pixiv.net/novel/show.php?id=14263573