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So I've been going back and forth with Ranma poses and I landed on this. I used it as a means of playing with screentones for further knowlegde on how to improve the doujinshi. I think it came out pretty well! 

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Henrik Jessen

It looks good! The pose on her left (from us, right) hand looks a bit odd, but that can be perspective. And there is a weird shift, if you look at her chest for two long...I think it's the line above her navel, which runs in a mostly straight line from her naughty bits to her belly button...but ends in the center of her left breast. Looking at that for a while kinda leaves the impression, that her upper body is not connected to her lower body in the right place. Part of this might be, that her upper body, though closer to the viewer, seems a bit small...which might just be, because Ranma is canonically drawn with a big bust, and these breasts are a bit more modest than that. I like a more modest bust, but it might be screwing up the perspective for me^^ Face and hips are perfect, and the overall picture is very good. the hand and the connection between upper and lower body just look a bit odd, but that could just be me.

head_cha_la

Thank you! And once again I really welcome your feedback! I think you're right. I definitely should have given her a larger bust, as I've reduced her down a bit here. Perspective is something I need to work further on but I'm glad overall you like the image ^_^!