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Hey guys!
After some discussion with the beta readers, it was determined that Gwyn could use some more insight into why others are so quick to follow her. We know why Onas is, so I wanted to show you guys the other people in her group.

With that, I did a big update to chapter 12 and it ended up being long enough to become both chapter 12 and 13. Soooo, I am going to attach both for today so you can read the updates. Chapter 13 is essentially just the end of the old chapter 12. However, chapter 12 got an additional 2.2K words added to it.

I hope you guys enjoy the additions!

Comments

John O'Connor

TFTC. Minor point. In chapter 12 the tree is described as laying across the length of the road. That’s a long tree or a short road.

Oxylus

Ha! Good catch. I just meant it was going from side-to-side. I'll fix that up, it'll probably just be in the RR version when it releases tomorrow there.