Derideal 15 - 21 WIP+BLOG (Patreon)

I don't know why I can't paste texts here, so I have to write this thing without pasting links... idk what happened, probably patreon doing their patreon things.

All I wanted to say about this page is that it wasn't included in the original draft of the script, I added this one at the last moment, thinking it might work as two things.

it's a literal "save the cat" moment, ahha I thought it was better to make it very literal, considering our protagonists.

but I think Daniel has a few of these moments now? just minor thing that make readers understand he's not as cold as the other scientists.

another reason to include it, was to just show a little bit of the city and the soldiers patrolling around, I think it contribute to make it feels more oppresive.