Derideal 14-31 WIP+BLOG (Patreon)

Hey! what's really interesting about this page is that the original dialog isn't nearly the same it ended up being, specially the final 3.

it had to do more with Orozco despise for "emotions" in a way.

1 - it's a pity for Daniel, but all of this made things easier for me.

2- they all will thank me later, because if I achieve the objective...

3- I'll erase from them forever all doubt and suffering from their lives.

it's a little more direct in a way, but also a little more cryptic, I've found that I like to hide motives of characters in most dialogs, it's part of the reason Derideal isn't too clear I think... like, I expect to reveal the information in little bits of clues, but most of the time it takes too long for another clue to show up for people to make the connections.

so I ended up modifying the dialogs in this page to make a little more clear her real intentions, and why she says certain things, we're going to deal with Orozco a little more since Daniel is gone, so I want readers to at least grasp the way she's thinking and realize there's a little more going on, either being the perfect conditioning or something else.

She's not really fond of Alpha and Ivory, but Orozco knows that if Ivory keeps poking around and not kept away from Alpha, she herself could end up becoming a target for the Consortium, it's sort of her way to made what she told to Daniel, that she'll take care of the xenos, in her own way I guess.

She need them quiet, obedient, and reliable for what's next...