Derideal "laura edit" Episode 4 (Patreon)

Hello everyone, it's been a while since I last updated the "Laura edit" version of Derideal part 1.
but I'm happy to say it's almost done now.

I had to make a hard choice in this episode of removing certain bits that I like, but that I consider would only rise more questions and confusion,

I hope this enhances reading experience, and also confuse less readers.

• most dialogs have been changed a bit, so these pages needs text revisions again :/
• story should be faster, and easier to follow now.
• Improved color contrasts.
• improved margins.

Let me know if you find any spelling or text mistakes! or something without translations.

UPDATE 1- some text have been fixed, thanks @twilight @madpostman