Loyal path script / PART 3 (Patreon)

here's the third post with further translations of the "Loyal path episode 1" comic script I made.

I think next update will be the entire episode.

I hope you've find it interesting, all of this part is "mine" in a sense, in the original script Althalos fought some random troops and got captured and Lee just fought along side.

I decided to include "Cassius" Barda's son, to give them a direct antagonist force, also made sure Li spent some time with "Jake" and Jake felt a little more interested to befriend Li was also important to me, so I made all those scenes where he's basically impressed by how he saves the little kid in the previous part.