Derideal episode 2 (Laura edit) (Patreon)

Hello, this is the new version of Episode 2 of Derideal! it got a ton of changes this one, but no bonus scenes sadly :c
for now just some panel redraws.

most important of this episode is that dialogs should be clear and it should feel faster and shorter without too many in-between "quiet" pages.

changes:

• Many pages cut or merged into new ones.
• all dialogs modified to hopefully make it more clear (rebels and scientists)
• Aden dialogs modified to make him talk more like he was in legacy.
• improved margins and safe areas for printing.
• rebel scenes were resumed.
• page count kept under 30.
• removed many troublesome gradients.
• improved color contrasts in each page.

UPDATED! TEXT GOT SEVERAL CORRECTIONS, THANKS @MADPOSTMAN