Derideal "the storm" WIP + blog (Patreon)

I've been trying to keep pushing forward with the making of the next part of Derideal, but I hit against a more difficult mountain to climb this week.

I had an episode that I wrote probably around the same time I made the remake, I liked it but now I felt it was sub-par with the rest of the story, and I can't discuss much detail about it, but I ended up rewriting most of it, but managed to keep the same idea and save a few panels :).

Alpha design changed from the older concepts I had of him, in the storyboard he styles his long hair... now I decided to give Alpha some of Aden's look, even if he also got a bit of a buff in terms of body strength, compared to the initial episodes of Derideal part 2 I'm re-touching... I felt he's been just growing and getting stronger over the years for all the training (also cats are just more muscular)
Ivory got a few updates, but mostly making her key features to be more noticeable.

also, I wanted to share this panel because I feel it's moody, Alpha facing a storm?
what could this mean? there's a lot of time ahead before anyone see this comic page, but I thought the scene was nice to share.