XEN-Fragile-16 WIP+BLOG (Patreon)

This page was conflictive for me, I wasn't convinced about the first sequence.
in the original the dog howls, Nova get scared as she knows something will happen, then the rest of bad guys pack up, then she decides to fire
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in the new sequence, the dog howls, Nova just realizes something will happen, but get more decided and proceeds to fight. it's just something small, but I think it manages to show her character a little better.

I used to just go with the first ideas I had, but now I've been trying to learn about taking more and more time to revise things, fixing up the page sizes to fit, then considering layouts and poses for readability, then re-draw every pose to see if I can make it more complex or improve... sometimes, decide to re-do everything.