Alpha x Ivory comic style test (Patreon)

this is how the Alpha x Ivory comic will look probably.

I was trying to come up with a black and white style with color accents (hopefully no more than 2 extra colors) 

I'm also trying to bring back some of my gradient shading I use in Derideal but just in black and white, it takes a little longer but still is way less time than making the comic in color.

what do you think?

I was thinking drawing Derideal using the same style later on, after episode 10 (just for time optimization)