Derideal episode 7 revision (Patreon)

this is my current long-term project

I'm revising every page of the Derideal legacy from 5 to 10 now

fixing up Dialogs and taking the chance to do quick improvements to the pages.

in this case I mostly improved Alpha's pose and fixed up the background contrast and I also tried to make the buildings skyline to look better ....

I'm noticing that I was ALWAYS rushing when making these older comics. In the remake comic I spend lots of time on a single page so it looks better, did it by stages trying to get a nice look from lineart to color -specially in the last pages-

but in this older comic pages I thought I was doing a good job... now I feel I was trying to finish quickly to release... some panels and drawings could be better, but luckily it doesn't require me to re-draw the entire comic, just add more lines and distort some elements and it's done.

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