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Here you go guys and gals. First scene of the next chapter. Going back to the classics with this part, chock full of silly and stupid for a quick cheap laugh. Odds are the full chapter coming out for xmas might be a bit shorter than the norm, but gosh darn it I'm going to make good with my promise.

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Anonymous

I'm pretty sure in an earlier chapter you mentioned that Hana and Anko had been sent to Suna to help them cope with the Iwa refugees that had trickled south. I had been expecting a scene of Ghost weeping that he still couldn't get laid because his girls were in a whole different country, rather than, well, this. Not that this isn't funny. This is even funnier. It's just that sometimes I feel like you forget what you've already written in order to maximize the amount of funny/epic in each chapter. I can't really blame you, as TTRT is an almost 1-million-word story that you've been writing for almost ten years. I'm also not sure what Shizune has been doing lately. She was in Iwa at first, then came back to Konoha at some point without any explanation. Either way I'm looking forward to the Summit. Also looking forward to the Omake. Not only is Ghost's house arrest preventing him from getting laid'; it's also preventing him from competing with Santa. Well, that and the infinite paperwork.

Anonymous

Ahaha, I'll point it out sooner if I see it again. I can think of a couple more examples though not as notable. In Yet Again, I think you mentioned that the Raikage came into power in response to the Hyuga affair, whereas in the previous chapter it sounds like he came into power during the Third War. Personally, I think it fits more, especially since I think you made a throwaway comment hinting that Kumo restarted its kidnapping program, this time targeting Iwa (hint hint ?). Have you had any luck finding a new beta?