ETA chapters / Question regarding feedback (Patreon)
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Hey, got an evening off, nice.
More chapters next Saturday.
I'll delete the reuploads then as well and change the tiers again.
There was criticism regarding the pov changes and the time spent with characters other than Ilea. How do you feel about it, is it an issue/boring or does it add to the world building?
Mild spoilers below for 4$/2$ Patrons and probably in the comments, so be aware.
Please consider that these Pov changes are not planned to be a permanent thing, this isn't going to be GoT with 15 different PoVs that regularly change. It's just that in the current arc some of the characters are split up and have their own things happening. I wanted to do this to both build the characters and world up a little without having Ilea directly interact with everything. The chapters are released in singles/doubles or more, which creates the problem that it's annoying if all you get in a week is chapters without the main character. I get that.
Again, let me know what you think. I started writing this novel to create something I'd like to read and I'm obviously still learning. Feedback on things like this is highly appreciated and considering the mostly positive opinions, specific criticism is great for me to learn and improve.
Of course I want to avoid changing up the whole story because of single voices not liking specific things but at least I'll have it on the radar. When I write I sometimes think of the bigger picture and not like a reader currently in the chapter so things like this issue might get overlooked.