November 2020 Patreon Poll Alternate Script (Patreon)

I mentioned that the original draft script of the November Poll Pic involved Kathy being the one to take advantage of the ladies hypnotized by an episode of Scooby Doo. For those of you curious as to how that would've gone, here's the script:

Panel 1: Darlene, Tanya, and Peg are sitting around watching TV. They’re all cosplaying as Daphne to some degree. 

Caption: Tanya and Peg decided to host their First Annual Daphnovember Scooby Doo Watch Party. Only Darlene has showed up so far, though others have been invited…

Peg (1): I figured Kathy would’ve been here by now.

Tanya: Maybe she’s running late, babe. It happens.

Peg (2): Probably. I hope she’s able to get Kisstress to come with her. 

Darlene: Hey, “Bedlam at the Big Top” is on! I love that episode.

Panel 2: Close up on Tanya, Peg, and Darlene, as Tanya talks to Peg.

Tanya: “Bedlam at the Big Top”…isn’t that the one – 

TV: Watch the pretty coin of gold…

Panel 3: Same angle, but now the three have spiral eyes.

Tanya, Peg, Darlene, and TV: …you will do as you are told.

Panel 4: Close up on Kathy, who’s also cosplaying Daphne. 

Caption: Later…

Kathy: Hey guys, sorry I’m late. I tried getting Kisstress to come, but she was busy dealing with what she said was “another one of those dumb fucking megacrossovers.” She also said she may be dead soon, but not to worry because this sort of thing happens all the time and she’ll get better. Then I got stuck in traffic and…

Panel 5: Zoom out, as Kathy sees Tanya, Peg, and Darlene sitting around, hypnotized. Kathy’s irked.

Kathy (1): Seriously, guys? Hypnotized by Scooby Doo? Come on, you’re better than that. 

Kathy (2): -sigh-

Kathy (3): Guess I’ll have to wake you all up then.

Panel 6: Same angle.

Panel 7: Same angle, but now Kathy’s laughing.

Kathy (1): HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Kathy (2): Freeing people from hypnosis…oh god, I crack me up. Like that’s a possibility in this fetishistic hell world. 

Kathy (3): Come on, let’s do naughty stuff. 

Tanya, Peg, Darlene: Yes, mistress.

Panel 8: Tanya, Peg, and Darlene are all making out with Kathy. Some are eating her out, some are sucking on her tits, you know the drill.

Kathy: Ohhhhhhh god…too bad Kisstress missed out on this. Whatever. More for me!