Narrator's/writer's voice in comics/rendered stories (Patreon)

Hi!

You might have noticed that throughout the latest rendered story (Stepsister) - there is no Author's voice boxes at all. it was a conscious decision that I made for this specific story. I feel that having only pure dialogue + the visual itself might make a rendered story feel faster in pace. also, it's a different challenge to deliver some details without using a "Storytellers box".
of course, the downside is: the story might also feel shallower since I'm not getting into the depth of a character's mind and soul and using words to describe them.

What do you guys think? what are you enjoying more?