Phoenix – Vocal WIP (Patreon)

I started this tune back in JULY and have been working on it here and there for the last few months and FINALLY found out what I wanted to say, lyrics wise <3

The song is EVERYWHERE and I'm kind of still experimenting with the vocal processing. There's something really cathartic about just overdriving them with the maximalist production, but am extra open to thoughts and critique on them :O3

Other than that, I'm thinking of bouncing an unmastered instrumental so I can exaggerate dynamics and transitions a little more and have the vocals fit a weeh bit better, mix wise.

Also some more spoken word.

Chorus

Break me

from this

meaty corpse

I don’t

want to

fucking

die

Verse

Naive like your 19 x6

growing like your 20 x6

Invincible like 21

dissociate at 22

Fucking like your 19 x6

drunk like your 20 x5

sober like your 21

doubting like your 22

Chorus 2

Forever Young

I wanna be Forever young

Don’t you wanna live forever?

I wanna live forever

I’m sick of

forever young

i wanna be forever young

Break

Aphex Twin Spoken word thing

Verse 2

Web MD told me I might be dead x9

It might explain my sleepy woozy head x10

09 struggle, I dreamt that NINTENDO

deleted All my roms today

but I can can be gay for gerard way

and who could forget y2k

Stamp on the ground

I THINK we’ll live it right now

moving all around

paws and all

Chorus 3

We’ll feel

Past ideals

till we

find our zeal

We’ll live

Platonian ideals

present is the

past, surreal