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AwBH page 43 (Patreon)

Published:
2019-05-25 16:25:45
Imported:
2021-01

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This page of Angels with Broken Hearts is brought to you by:

Sponsors: Kahlem Alexander, K. Mosley Kevin, RelightCharge, Kei Dracen, Brandyn Williams, $t3f@n13Th3M3w2, ShadowTheFelkin

Benefactors: Karashata, Dragonmalte, Loris Puech, Foxon Silverfur, KiLEdEnNis, Smeck,  "Spooky" Sly, Tsargoth, Isaiah Daniel Hall-Brooks, Halio, Pau Barcelo, Sakon Shima, Razzle The Red, NoLife_v3,  LeSirBen, Candra Moon, Atecom, LukasDeAudi, Test, TAB, Elijah "Draco" Hurt,  Dennis Roth, Apollovo, Humin, SilverAndCyanide, BananaSplit2, Vareoth 

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Anonymous

A suggestion; remove panel four and move the dialogue box from panel 5 up to panel 3. Knowing that Adine does not want to talk to her parents is enough to allow the reader to think how Amelia would respond to that without seeing a reaction, it would also make it easier to read the page. On top of that, take the dialogue from panel 2 and move it to panel 1, move around text boxes for reading flow.

Anonymous

Sorry to be petty, panel 5 last sentence, remove 'and' then you will be sorted.