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Fiction Special - Guardians II (Patreon)

Published:

2020-04-12 01:22:38

Imported:

2023-09

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Content

Another snippet from my Ceteriverse.

Comments

Anonymous

Good sense of background but I think you shifted into first person a paragraph or two in.

2020-04-12 20:14:59.691000

Damn it. I did. Grrr. But that's why I'm doing these. Honing my craft a bit.

2020-04-12 20:35:29.056000

Anonymous

It yeah it threw my right outa the story while I went looking for who "I" is

2020-04-12 20:46:46.442000

I'll make sure I don't screw up like that again. Thanks for reading! I haven't gotten much feedback for these little fiction snippets I've been doing, but I'mma keep doing them

2020-04-12 20:49:26.586000

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