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All across the country, greedy young ladies can't get enough of that delicious new snack food -- Gopher Cakes. Of course, eating too much can have real consequences for the waistline... and eating WAY too much can have even worse consequences! Two greedy gluttonous girls, Amy and Brooke, are only the latest victims of the Gopher Cake craze, stuffing their faces with delicious pastry goodness far beyond reason or sanity... But how much can a girl hold before she just goes pop?

This is a wacky fantasy story involving overeating, weight gain, inflation, and popping based both an idea suggested by a friend AND an old PSA commercial that some of you may remember. You can find it on Youtube, I'm sure.

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John FD Lobrano

I'm not familiar with this PSA, mind giving me a hint?

Onion

This was fantastic - one of the best popping stories I've read! Your short pieces are just great. You establish character and world so rapidly, it's a real pleasure to read. This really hits all the right notes for me as far as unrepentant hedonistic getting their comeuppance for their reckless self indulgence.

Onion

My guess it it'd be the "Munchies" one from many years back that warned about the consequences of mindless eating

mollycoddles

Thanks, that's high praise! :) I enjoy some good popping stories when I'm in th emood, but they're hard to find. A lot of them focus on the victim being terrified and that's not really the most exciting thing for me... I like it a lot more when the victim just keeps on keeping til the end XP