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Too Much Gain : Final Part (Patreon)

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2024-04-15 09:06:31
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2024-05
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Hi guys !

The last part of "Too Much Gain" is out now !

Here's the link to access (as usual, if it doesn't work for you, please send me a direct message, I'll give you another link).

I hope you'll like this conclusion.

Have a great week !

PS : The last panel of the comic may take a little longer to load, so wait a while to make sure you don't miss it (if you see "The End", then you've seen it all!).

G-U-C

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iamrawr

Sad that one of your comics is ending but what a finale! That ending was a pleasant surprise.

Cyberweasel89

Hmm... Personally, I think I found this lacking. Maybe it's because of the lack of a love interest, but moreso it's the ending. It feels so... random and inconclusive. Like, it didn't feel satisfying as a conclusion like your other comics that got finales. Each of the final scenes with the doctor and gym felt like they didn't get enough going on in them. There wasn't much lactation despite the hints at it. Aside from the doctor, I don't think there wasn't much in the way of other characters, to the point it felt unusual that gymrats didn't react to the girl with the massive boobs swelling out of her clothes as she exercises. Especially when it would've had some great writing opportunities due to how wholesome and supportive gym bros can be. Now, it wasn't without positives. I do VERY much relate to her getting turned on from struggling to fit through doors, since "inconvenient breasts" (as it's called on Danbooru) is a huge sub-kink of my BE fetish. I also enjoyed how the doctor was so professional yet warm with her, as that's my experience with doctors IRL so it was very refreshing to see. I dunno, I guess when it comes down to it, the ending didn't feel as satisfying as your other works. It didn't seem to offer a true conclusion like Heavy Feelings and The Magic Lake. No definitive words. Even if it was meant to be a "and the adventure continues," there's no real mention of what that might entail. I expected some kind of diagnosis for her continued growth or something. Eh, maybe I'm just being picky.

g_u_c
>>135317312

I understand your critique. Frankly, I wished to elaborate on this ending, especially the doctor/patient relationship, which I found very intriguing. Unfortunately, I ran out of time. When you support me on Patreon, I must adhere to deadlines because I've made a commitment to you. I had this idea, which I thought was quite original, to conclude the comic with an animation. However, it was my first time attempting something like this, and I underestimated the time it would take. Still, I'm glad that many of you enjoyed this ending, but I'm convinced it could have been much better. I believe it's a mistake I won't repeat; if I need more time to finish a comic, I'll take it, even if it means surpassing the deadline. Regardless, thank you again for your support and honesty. I hope you'll enjoy the next comic more.