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Marvelous Mage (Discussion/Critique/Changes) (Patreon)

Published:
2024-04-25 17:16:23
Edited:
2024-04-25 17:40:55
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2024-05
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SPOILERS FOR BROCKTON BAY'S MARVELOUS MAGE

So, Marvelous Mage is still in its early stages, meaning that there is still time to adjust and shift things around. I want to know what everyone thinks so far about the concept, the powers, the direction of the characters, and anything that you might be thinking.

I am debating doing a re-write, as I feel there is... something missing. At minimum, I will likely be changing how frequently the Marvelous Mage charges come in, because while I don't want the MC to grow too powerful too quickly, two weeks still feels like a long time for now development.

So please, tell me what you think!

Comments

TyrTheFallen

I always think that for this type of story the charges should become more expensive as time goes on. For example a mc would get a ability/charge for 2k words then after they have a base to work from make it 3k then 4k and so on.

Louis Kasser

I think it's too early to tell. Geomancy seens nerfed at the moment. I wasn't expecting the MC to make a volcano on top medhall, but outside of absorbing materials for more durablility the skill seems a bit boring.

Robert Meta
>>136289385

Yeah, that's on me. For some reason, when I wrote the description for Geomancy in the vote, my brain just thought it was obvious. Looking back now, I have no idea why I thought that. I will try to give better descriptions of what people are voting on in the future so this kind of thing doesn't happen.