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Tusk AO CH # 73 NSFW (Patreon)

Published:
2020-07-27 17:00:01
Edited:
2024-04-20 01:12:10
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2024-07
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Em

Ok. I need to ask this. Did you just have Daniel with Claw and Fang with Damien for an actual reason? Or was it just for drama sake? Because initially, I thought this was all to make Daniel and Fang stronger. I thought all of this was to build them up, and to in the end make them realize that despite infidelity they want each other. That people are able to make mistakes and move on. However, when you do things like this, it doesn’t feel like you’re adding anything to those lessons. It makes Fang look very weak and cheap, yet you expect us to accept him as Daniel’s Alpha? When you create scenes like this, where Fang visually shows regret at not having cheated on his husband, it makes all that they went through feel pointless. Keep in mind that your readers have to CARE about the characters. Otherwise they will just get frustrated. My advice, as a writer and fan, is to let this arc die with this conversation. It isn’t adding anything but antipathy toward your characters. Don’t cheapen the lesson you tried to create with these two.

Rose Marie
>>41103670

I was going to message this as an author myself (A #1 Best Seller on Amazon might I add lol) that this Comic literal and I don’t mean this in a joking way, gives me full on depression. I’ve constantly thought about this as an author where is Fang desiring Damien is going and if I want to stay around to have my heart broken for my favorite omega Daniel time and time again. Honestly I WISH Fang would have cheated because maybe just maybe he’d have a conscious and this could be over. You’re right about Fang not seeming like an alpha he definitely acts more like a beta i think What’s so frustrating is that literally EVERY OTHER ALPHA in this comic treats their spouses and loved ones better than Fang treats Daniel lol 😂 like bruh this man aint cheated on you in over ten whole years and loved you unconditionally through your whole marriage and gave you a child he originally didn’t want and bowed his head to you and here you are a WHOLE ASS ALPHA mind you lusting for another man and acting like this man didn’t give up EVERYTHING for you. Bro throw the whole character away 😭 Fang is legit selfish and a not Alpha material. I mean this respectfully to the author your comic is great but I DESPISE Fang sorry.

BloodingHeart

Well, the truth is that I did not expect to receive so much sand for these episodes, I have always noticed that when Daniel cheated on Fang and he behaved like a cuddly kitten with Claw there was more acceptance than when it is Fang who acts like a fool in front of Demian. I don't want to justify Fang, but from my point of view, at least he had the will to resist and be loyal to his husband. Let's take a look at Fang for a moment. He is a low class, innocent and pure alpha who fell in love with a rich and popular omega, Daniel was Fang's first and only man, we can blame Fang for (after being a faithful boyfriend and husband for over 10 years ) feel attracted to someone else? He had a crush on Demian, he almost cheated on Daniel, but he DIDN'T, he made a mistake but in the end he remained loyal to his husband, quit his job for the sake of his marriage and family. A short time later he discovered that his husband cheated on him for years as he broke his back by working trying to be worthy of someone like Daniel. And yet, instead of cheating on him and paying him the same coin, he was able to forgive Daniel and move on. Fang LOVES Daniel, perhaps he does not love him with the same intensity as before because he discovered that Daniel was not the person he thought he was, but he loves him. Fang is attracted to Demian? Yes. Just like Daniel will ALWAYS love Claw. Daniel made a fuss when he discovered that Demian was pregnant and thought that his baby's father was Claw, he went after him and even doubted whether to abandon Fang and stay with Claw but he realized that it was "too late" and chose to stay with Fang. If you weigh the mistakes they both made, I think Daniel's sins outweighed Fang's mistakes. I think everyone is being very severe with Fang and you forget that what Daniel did to him was much worse. But well, maybe I'm wrong and I'm a bad writer, I don't know.

Em
>>41107474

It's not that we're excusing Daniel. I felt the same way when Daniel was contemplating leaving Fang for Claw. I felt that it was dramatic for the sake of drama, and to be honest, I didn't really enjoy that either. In fact, I stopped reading for that part. This isn't about who cheated "worse". They BOTH cheated on one another. Fang was both emotionally AND physically attracted to Damien. They also kissed. Daniel and Fang BOTH betrayed one another. I'm not taking score to see who hurt who worse, because they BOTH hurt each other. When it comes to marriage and relationships, you're not keeping score. Betrayal is a lot like sin. One does not outweigh the other. But you showed us that they were willing to forgive and move on from that pain. We were supposed to accept that they have grown and learned to forgive one another. However, you've now fast forwarded the narrative 2+ years, and I feel like, there should be more growth in Fang. Daniel had his arc with Claw. We saw him torn, we saw him overcome that temptation and go back to his Alpha. But Fang is still in the same place with Damien that he was two years ago. Recollecting over uneaten cakes?