I could use a couple of beta readers for a Mega Cat flash fiction story (Patreon)

I'm not ready to post this one publicly yet, but I'd love to have a couple of beta readers to check out the draft. 

I wrote a Mega Cat flash fiction story (only 1200 words) that I want to eventually publish with my other CCH short stories. My 'real life' writing group has suggested some improvements, but now I'd really like to get some feedback from people who know more about the Speckverse. 

Warning: There's a dark theme that will be apparent in the first couple of paragraphs. If it disturbs you, please just stop reading. I'll understand.

If you'd like to beta read, just comment below, and I'll send a PM later this week to the folks who volunteer. It's a very short read, just a few minutes.

(*this request goes out to Patrons of ANY level, because I'd really appreciate the help)