Script = 1st draft (Patreon)

I managed to get the first draft complete last night. It's very first draft and clunky in places but it's bsaically all there. I'll sit on it for a few days then take a second pass at it.  Currently there's no sign of Jully in it anywhere and I really think I should also introduce her so I'll be adding in some stuff for her.

I really should do this for the Dirty Angels story. Usually my comic scripts are lines of dialog with occaisional stage directions. With everything super abbreviated.  Screenplay format gets me to think of things a bit deeper. The only problem is I sometimes get really anxious over having the right formatting.