Piper Storm Hawks Redraw (Patreon)

I reused some of the assests from the original but I didn't want to completely recreate the background. Overall I think this is a dramatic improvement. I have noticed that my new style is less detail oriented in the hair and my skintone shading is way more subtle. I may try to go back to more detailed work in the hair but I think the more subtle skintone shading works well with my art style. What do you think? Is there anything else that I should be focusing on to improve my style? All suggestions and recomendations welcome! ;D