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That's all for this short story folks! While not my favourite story, and I think I didn't spend enough time developing character and beats before going in, and I felt it overstayed it's welcome a bit, but I'm glad I stuck with it til the end anyway. I learned a lot from this in terms of comics, again, so I think it benefits the long run.

That being said, I do still hope people like it, and I don't think it was my 'worst work ever' or something, but perhaps I am just critical of my comics so far in general, cause I felt that way about the first two as well, in some way. The full comic will be in the 5$+ tier for this month, and after that it'll be gone from the Patreon. 

So, thank you! For the feedback, support and comments on this comic during its run. The next will be the following Predators comic, starting next month, and during the rest of April I'll be posting more concept work for it, characters, backgrounds, etc.

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Cylianthe (Falkiveurr)

Can't wait for predators. The first one is my wife's favorite

Silvador

LOVE Zoqi's reaction in the last panel! XD

SVKwolf

Rip expensive holographic monitor, died for a greater good [T]7

Scappo

Congratulations on wrapping this one up man! I totally understand how you feel regarding it not being your favorite story and feeling rushed, but you gotta take the good with the bad I suppose. I'm sure you'll find the next one more to your liking and I look forward to it!

KHVathiel

Hahah that was awesome xD imo I feel the eyes shoulda been bigger at the end, but overall it was a cute comic. It had an unexpected kink (heh get it?) To it and the ending was also cute and funny. Leaves it up to the reader as to what happens next and I like that &lt;3 thanks for the silly comic! And oh hush you're its creator you're allowed to look back and go "hmmmm I can do better" so don't fret lol, just means you know more to do better next time x3

Todd Whitesel

yay more predators! BTW when I first signed up and went back through the Patreon feed to get caught up, I was able to download the web versions of predators ch1 but apparently page 2 never got posted :/ Can we still get the HD version of predators by requesting the old artpack from, i guess its march 2016?

iceFox

I just love Zoqi's reaction in the last panel xD. Looking forward to Predators 2!!

Ion

It's good to be humble and look at your work critically so you can improve in the future but I thought it was great anyway! Or maybe I just have a weakness for the more submissive types like Twix... XD

Skeleton Man

that last panel XD, amazing work.

Spryte Bou

Adored the comic, and really do hope this is far from the last we see of these two. Seriously please don't let it be the last we see of them! I want to see how "Burying the Knot" goes &lt;3

Bionet

For what it's worth, I really liked this comic, though that may be because it focused on a lot of things that I love personally. If the work on this comic is helping you improve for the future, that's even better!

Volpethrope

This was a really fun comic. You got to give some personality to Twix and newcomer Lia so they're not just porn fodder. You did some visual worldbuilding with the backgrounds. And the sexual content was delicious. That said! While you do some excellent porn, I do want to see a lot more worldbuilding from you. You have a very interesting setting here waiting to be expanded on and shown in full. I would love to get a LOT more story content for it between porn scenes. I don't care if the next comic in this setting has sexual content, but I would personally prefer that it's not the focus. Scappo's waystone comics have been sufffering HARD from this - here's five pages of worldbuilding, followed by twenty or more pages of porn, then the comic ends. Several months of work spent for the readers to learn very little other than "damn, that chick can take a cock, I guess." I want to see this world live and breathe. But that requires -you- to -let- it. ;D

Zephy Foxy

I went back and read this from the beginning since I'm still new to this patreon, and all I can say is........hooooooooooly shit, that was hot~ Not just because I -love- dickgirls, but because I think it's hot that Twix became a total sub as soon as he saw that package. Who can blame him~?

SCPilot

I actually agree on the same exact things as well.

Spartan277

I gotta say, I would really be in huge favor of a lot of world building comics, The TnA is nice, but I Think that the world could really be made to live a lot more if you did more world building. Honestly, my interest in the comic stopped soon as the sex began, Granted this was not by cup of tea what so ever, but I found the world fascinating, and Ara is just not enough to let us view into the world. Obviously you can do what ever you want, but I would adore the chance to see the world in more detail and how the place works as well as how the military or even civis just go about their day to day stuff, even a glimpse.

Hafunui

Dunno what I can say that hasn't been said already, but I like this comic :) And I think Twix has gotten cuter since the first page haha.

Anonymous

Totally read that last panel in the stupid voice you did when you explained that bloody joke XD silly burd

Issac Streyer

Loved the comic and the characters! Would absolutely love to see more of them.

Shinault Sketches

Fluff-Kevlar: Please tell me you plan on making, "Bury the Knot," a continued comic of this!