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Page 13 sketch (Patreon)

Published:
2015-10-12 01:17:10
Imported:
2020-09

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Let's preview what's coming shortly to Predators; I'm gonna type some short info bits about each page too, to make these more interesting!


In this one I wanted another internal x-ray shot; hasn't been one since page 8 and I just really enjoy doing them. I also wanted to show Mihari's impatience at getting it in there to highlight her desire to urge Rehzi onward. he's still a bit shy and taken back, whining out as he feels inside a girl for the first time, whereas she's just soaking it in. This is more of a transition page, the dialogue from page 12 where she attempts to motivate him continues in page 14 more heavily, culminating in page 15 and onward a change in temperament from Rehzi. The sex positions will change up a few times and take up the majority of the rest of the comic, so I wanted the big sink-in here to really pack a punch in expression.

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Tela

Even for a sketch, that's a naughty expression on Mihari's face~ She sure is into it... though it seems to be into her!

Volpethrope

I really like these in-motion x-ray shots. You're doing them pretty well to convey the movement. My main piece of advice right now would be to not overdo the position switching. From the patrons' perspective, it might seem okay because we get something new and varied every two weeks, but reading it as a complete work start-to-finish is way different. If they're in a new pose every page, it can come across as really disjointed, because you don't get time to absorb the action of each position. You don't get as much movement detail and varying perspectives. Basically, watch your pacing. :P But so far it's been really good. It hasn't felt like a rushed excuse to show a bunch of porn shots. They're naturally progressing through it. I'm confident you'll get a good feel for depicting it the way you intend and we'll get something amazing in return.

fluffkevlar
>>883969

Yeah, and thanks for the advice! I always go back and watch the overall motion and position of the piece as a whole, specially when doing thumbnails; i do a lot of pages all at once for best continuity of action.