Predators of Denali - Pages 39 and 40 (Patreon)
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Hey guys!
I reworked page 39. I know a lot of you were/are excited to see Bailey again, but re-reading it, and seeing how the act was interrupted for a 2nd(3rd ish?) time, I couldn't get it sitting right with me. I took to thumbnailing and re-scripting a few of the next pages in text only and with them, found a much smoother route to the goals. Bailey will emerge/insert more slowly and naturally this route, but it just feels just overall -nicer- to give some breathing room for the current act.
Enjoy some wolf digging in to sheep dick! My goal is to finish these within the end of month.