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I haven't forgotten! This page lets Tala and Bailey start to relax. Still working on the dialogue for this one, but I also left it blank to hopefully sell the sequence without it. I'll be working on this page later today (Sunday) perhaps on stream, and do the last request stream for the month on Monday the 30th.

I like the idea of making the most out of each panel, in terms of shots and am trying to avoid "filler" panels. I'd love for each one to be fun or sexy to look at, and sell some kind of emotional beat, especially as it heats up further over this page and the next. I hope you all will enjoy it!

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Evangellos

Ah yeah, the "hot spring scene"... a classic. There's hot springs in Alaska right? Haha-

Antoine Davis

Looks pretty cool so far, i like how you added in the lakes and other locations like in Denali and Alaska. But still, can't wait to see the finished page.

Silvador

<obligatory Jaws theme> :P

Kenith Fox

Lesbihonest, they are going to have a major bonding experience soon. I do like the idea of the more personal sort of love story with Tala and Bailey, but I still will be heartbroken when you got to say, "well, it's porn and they just gotta freak it out." (With goat hunk) I never thought I would be sad to get porn from you.

Heresy

I like where this is going. :3

Volpethrope

Time to embarrass the wolf! Well... more! I'm glad you want to take your time with it. There's no rush. Just gotta let the scenes evolve organically and at a good natural pace. This is good practice for the eventual chapters of your sci-fi story that will have sex in them - write a story that happens to have sex in it, DON'T write sex scenes that happen to have story around them. Even in erotica, the story should be more than just a vehicle to transport characters' genitals to each other. (And on that topic, when you're eventually working on the sci-fi story, please don't force sex into every chapter or whatever, please. It gets *really* obvious when it's being hamfisted into the plot to try and sell it better.)

Kaizer

It's happening! :D

fluffkevlar

Well I don't ever want it to be "just porn", I'm hoping I can make friendships believable in stuff like this; even with Massak showing up, it doesn't jump straight into sex. I hope in the end it looks to be a whole well-contained story :3

fluffkevlar

Agreed! And no, there's really not a lot of porn in my 'main story' idea. Mostly and usually optional. Focus would hopefully be on story and characters first.

shadowstarthe1st

I wish more artists did the dialogue last and tried even half as hard as you to sell it with only the expressions. Why i love your art so much