Dialogue Update: Chapter 5 (Pages 171-174, 179, 183-186, 188, 190, & 193) (Patreon)

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FINAL storyline/dialogue update for ya!

Recap: I've been reworking certain dialogue scenes/pages/parts of the story in preparation of the print version of BKI, Volume 1.

The next dialogue update/round of edits I worked on were from Chapter 5. WOO I'M FINALLY DONE WITH THESE 😭🙌

The changes I will be implementing here are as follows:

- General retouching/reworking of most dialogue & speech bubbles (wording, positioning, flow, etc.)

- Slight narrative edit on Page 184-185: okay so I know I've edited the dialogue on this page a couple different times, but I think this new text will fit much better. I kind of changed it to be a call back to chapters 1 & 3 where Norman moves shit around with his magic/powers. Idk it works but I'm still unsure if I LOVE it, ya know? I may just end up removing the text bubbles on panel 4 altogether.

Lmk what you think! Have a wonderful day/evening! 💕

-J

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