Dialogue Update: Chapter 3 (Pages 64-71, 73-79, 81-84, 86, & 88) (Patreon)

Hell-o AGAIN teehee 👹

Got another storyline/dialogue update for ya to feast your eyes on:

Recap: I've been reworking certain dialogue scenes/pages/parts of the story in preparation of the print version of BKI, Volume 1.

The next dialogue update/round of edits I worked on were from Chapter 3. This chapter actually wasn't too bad–I was able to get it all done in one night.

The changes I will be implementing here are as follows:

- General retouching/reworking of most dialogue & speech bubbles (wording, positioning, flow, etc.)

- Added 4th wall narration text on Page 79.

Lmk what you think! Have a wonderful day/evening! 💕

-J

© James Schleisman November 2019 All Rights Reserved.