Getting Better (re-draw) (Patreon)

It has been fixed! Of course, it's still far from perfect, but at least now Anna and Rebecca don't have weirdly stick-thin limbs, and their bed isn't enormous, lol. But I'm sure when I look at the new version two years from now, I'll be bothered by it again XD Ah, the life of a smut artist! Hope you like this new version!

Some changes you might not have noticed: I slightly re-positioned the positions of the speech bubbles so that you're less likely to read Rebecca's first. The wonky perspective on the window has been fixed. Also, Anna's legs are re-arranged so that one leg is pressed against 'Becca's crotch. ;) All in all, I'm glad that this exhibition in Hamburg came up to force me to re-evaluate the original drawing, because it really didn't turn out quite how I wanted, and I think it's much better now :D Also, isn't it fitting that this piece is called "Getting Better" and it's the piece I felt I had to re-draw because of the exhibition? The title has a new meaning now; I'm getting better at drawing all the time, hehe. Very excited to have this on a gallery wall next year!

I also included the 'draw this again' template for comparison, as well as a side-by-side photo of what the two drawings look like in person!