The Script for Kinks and Quirks part 2! (Patreon)

Okay! I really don't know if peeking behind the curtain like this is of interest to my patrons or not, so be sure to bitch me out in the comments if you don't care to see how I construct a comic, haha. On the other hand, if you're happy to see this kind of thing, let me know.

Anyway! The sequel of Kinks and Quirks part one has been scripted, as part of a commission for Anime Sage8, who gives me the guidelines and tells me what he wants to see in each installment! The comic features characters from My Hero Academia. If you don't know what that is, scroll through my backlog of $10 tier rewards and you'll find the link to part one. There's a lot of dialogue so I may need to find a way to cut it down in order to save page space, but we'll see. Anywho, here's the script for part twoooooo

PAGE 1:
a): Panel of just speech bubbles, not showing who says what. "Wait, so you just left them tied up?"

"What's the big deal! Both of them were really into it! They started going at it as soon as soon as I was done! Anyway, you should see the great ropework I did this time, Momo!"

"Well, Mina does have acid quirk, ya know. Both of them have probably bailed by now."

"Oh, that's right..."
b): Girls all bursting into the washroom. TSU: "That's really too bad. They would've made great--"
c): The girls crowd at the bathroom door, silence. Mina fully dressed and leaning up against wall with Uraraka. The two groups stare at each other, surprised.
d): MINA: Tooru, you were serious? You literally brought all the other girls!?" TOORU, pointing the safety scissors at: Aww, you really did dissolve the ropes!"
e): MINA: Dissolve the ropes? No way! This is authentic hemp rope! I wasn't about to waste it!" TOORU: "Aww... that means you got out on your own..." MINA: "Anyway, why are the rest of you here? Some kinda after-school bondage brigade?"
f): MOMO: You might say that...

PAGE 2:
a): MOMO: "It's a bit of a long story... you see, Jirou and I started dating early in the semester. Turns out we had some... interesting proclivities. And... Let's just say that today isn't the first time Tooru found out about something she shouldn't have!" Momo standing over Mina/Uraraka. M/U are sitting down and Mina is untying Uraraka. Meanwhile Tsu squats beside Uraraka and whispers something in her ear. Uraraka wide-eyed, blushing.
b): Shot of Mina and Uraraka looking up at other girls. TOORU: And then Jirou figured out what I was up to, and it wasn't long before we realized that we were all into bondage! "Jirou shrugs. "It just kinda went on from there." URARAKA: "And, uh..."
c): Wider shot showing Tsu licking Uraraka's feet. URARAKA: "...what about Tsu?"
d): TSU: "I like feet." JIROU: "She likes feet."
e): MOMO, waving hand dismissively. "It doesn't matter. Point is, for the past few weeks the four of us have been meeting after school every week to... well... JIROU, arm around Momo's shoulder and leering at her: "Fuck?"

PAGE 3:
a): MOMO, blushing: "...yeah." TOORU: "And Tsu here was just saying how she thought you two would make great additions to the team!" Now all the girls are standing. Uraraka, nude, still in a shibari body harness. JIROU: "O-only if you want, to, of course."
b): MINA: "Uhm, well, we... could I talk to Ochako alone for a sec?" Pulling Uraraka into bathroom stall.
c): Other girls awkwardly standing outside of closed stall, with Mina's speech bubbles easily audible. MINA: "It's totally okay if you don't wanna do this. I know you only just got used to being tied, so let's just tell them--" URARAKA: "Mina?" MINA: "Yes?"
d): URARAKA, fired up, eyes blazing: "Let's do this! A true hero never backs down when there's valuable experience to be gained!" MINA: "Eh-experience?"
e): URARAKA, grabbing Mina's shoulders: Just think of it! Learning to restrain and be restrained--perfectly transferable to the life of a hero! If we ever face a perilous hostage situation for real, imagine how prepared we'd be! Plus, it's totally sexy!"

PAGE 4:
a): MINA "I just have one condition, sweetie... You and I have to promise, no matter what kind of kinky stuff we do with the other girls...
b): MINA, leaning close to Uraraka. "...We'll always be each other's number one."
c): The girls kiss. URARAKA: "I wouldn't have it any other way!"
d): Outside the stall. Kissing/smacking/moaning noises. MINA: "Girls?" ALL GIRLS OUTSIDE STALL: "Yeah?" MINA: "...We're in!" JIROU: "Did... do you want your clothes back?" URARAKA: "Just... ah... give us a minute!"
e): A MINUTE LATER. URARAKA: "Alright! Let's Go!"

PAGE 5:
a): Girls in hallway, fully dressed now. MINA: "You comfortable, Ochako?" URARAKA, dreamy expression: "Very."
b): Showing Uraraka's rope harness under her clothes like an X-Ray. URARAKA: "...it feels so snug!"
c): Uraraka works her way to front of group as they're about to round a corner, hand to her crotch, looking slightly dazed. JIROU: She sure seems to be a fan of your ropework, Mina! Mina giggling. Tooru bringing up the rear, arms crossed. Midnight approaches from other side of the corner, unseen by the girls.
d): Uraraka bumping into Midnight. "WAHHH!"

PAGE 6:
a): URARAKA: "Muh-muh-MIDNIGHT! Oh, I--I'm sorry! I, uh--" MIDNIGHT: "Uraraka? Girls? What are--"
b): MINA: "That's okay, Uraraka! It was nobody's fault! Let's move along, don't wanna block the hallway and I'm sure Midnight's a verybusypersonokaylet'sgo." Mina comes up behind and starts pulling Uraraka away. Seen from Midnight's higher point-of-view, we can see the rope under Uraraka's clothing as her clothes are pulled askew by Mina's tugging. Uraraka looking up bashfully at Midnight as she's pulled away.
c): Close-up of Midnight's eyes.
d): Close-up of the bit of rope under Uraraka's clothes.
e): Midnight, smirking and watching over her shoulder as the girls bustle away. MIDNIGHT, thought: "What are those girls up to?"

PAGE 7:
a): Exterior view, Momo's mansion. URARAKA, unseen: "WOAHHHH! This is your HOUSE!?"
b): Interior, Momo's mansion. Walking through hallway towards descending stairs. MOMO: "Don't let it intimidate you! It's the perfect place to... 'practice.' I'm allowed plenty of privacy. But it's the basement that's important to our purposes. Follow me!"
c): Basement interior. MOMO: "Here we are! MINA, jaw dropped: "Oh my God." URARAKA: "Holy crap!"
d): The full image of the dungeon. MOMO: "Ladies... welcome to my pleasure palace!"

(yet to be determined exactly what is included in this 'pleasure palace').

Thanks for reading! It'll take me quite a long time from this stage since I'm always slow with comics, but I hope I've generated some interest in it, haha.