"Candy" by Hollewdz from Patreon

Hot damn! That do look attractive. <3 Funnily enough, the erotic action happening here was not the biggest thing that caught my eye but rather an interesting detail regarding the close up with the giant’s face. When I drew my attention to the big head that housed the cave for the slimy appendage, I was initially distracted with how it looked. And the more I thought about it, I believe it was because of a lack of presence or shape of a giant nose. However, keep in mind! This is based purely on my personal perception of looking at the close-up giant face and how I assume anatomy works. So, my perception most likely heavily differed from others I imagine. That said, when I thought about this a little more. I came to the realization: You actually paid a great deal of attention to proportion consistency with this close-up! Two things factoring into this: (1) The bottom joint of the finger (the one closest to the knuckle) can cover the majority of distance between the upper lip and the bottom of the nose. And the width of the finger you drew exceeds the distance between the top of the upper lip that you’re portraying in this picture. Meaning: The nose would actually be off-screen and so the width of the bottom finger joint has fantastic consistency with the close-up to the face you’re presenting. (2) The use of the fringes of hair covering the top-right of her head is a smart detail and use to hide the remaining upper half. So this original distraction turned into a realization of great attention to detail you conveyed! … But enough of that analytical nonsense. This is great! Excellent angle of the giant head’s tilt, the tongue movement equally looks greatly depicted wrapping around the body! The fangs, wet droplets, and hyper close-up make the erotic act all the more intimate! Great job making the action feel close and personal!

Tamekindofguy (edited)

Hollewdz

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Wow, thank you for taking the time to look at my art so closely! :] I had actually gotten stuck on the nose, after drawing it a bunch of times different ways, and I couldn't figure out a good way to include it without it looking out of place, or drawing attention away from the main action of the piece. Anatomically, there would at least be the underside of the nose showing where the right-most hair is, but I'm happy with the way I drew it in the end ^^ Although, something that I wish I had been able to come up with a solution for is how the left arm and hand of the woman points to nothing. There's a big empty space at the bottom right of the piece that I wish I could have come up with a solution for, or at least maybe pointing her hand back towards the bottom middle, so that the eye of the viewer would lead in a circle around the piece, from the center, to her face, to the mouth and arm, then to her groin again. But That just means I have this information for next time ! ^^ I'm very excited to draw more pieces like this one, so learning as much as I can here will help in that way :]

Tamekindofguy

Glad that you're happy with what you drew! Based on the angle this is drawn, the nose and whatever visible part of it you'd want to show would have to be protruding towards the viewer. Not to mention, how you'd want to draw/stylize it. All factors considered, I think you did a great job with compromising a lack of the upper face with the close-up and finger size! Regarding your second paragraph, this is mostly me spitballing, so feel free to disregard or not. I think the bottom right is filled well enough with the very close-up face of the giant in the background to not feel as empty when the background is part of the action in front of the picture. That said, if you want to fill in the bottom right with something (and I could be off with the proportions and consistency between the length of the finger relative to the tiny), you could have the giant hand resting on its back. So that the remaining length of the finger would be visible as an arch bending upwards in a circular fashion towards the tiny's back. The issue I could see here is that: the finger you're using here is likely the index finger. And so if you tried to do the same thing with the hand lying on its back, the giant face would have to be pressing/resting against the remaining three fingers to get close to wrapping the tongue around the tiny. Which I imagine you'd have to then consider drawing those fingers partially resting on the face for consistency. This could be remedied by switching the index for a middle finger, which is closer to the face and also have less fingers pressed to the face to consider drawing. This way you could have the remaining visible length of the giant finger in the bottom right if you wanted to fill it. And have her hand grabbing the finger if you want. Also, this is more of a humoring thought to ponder: In the picture, the tiny's only form of stability is grabbing the giant tongue while trying to sit on a finger. And I'd imagine she'd have a hard time getting a good hold/balance on such a slippery and soft appendage. Just putting it out there. Haha. Either way, it's very cool to see you continue to learn and apply all this in your future artworks! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!! ^^

LumberSquatch

You like how this turned out? Well i LOVE how this turned out.

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