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Dollhouse Database: Party 2 (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2023-03-17 22:33:13
Edited:
2023-05-22 11:13:41
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Another chapter of the party! I hope you guys enjoy!

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Erick

Amazing

Erick

I love it so much

Erick

By the way, I'm organizing all stories in a folder

Kage Tsukino

Story wise, his guy was pathetic. He was in FULL CONTROL and he still lost his cool to his toy. He should have just laughed it off or turned up the sensitivity. I guess that's the point though, these guys are the dregs of society that ESMC dragged up.

pikapika

Could the file naming rules follow like (001),(002)... Otherwise my system always shows the wrong order.Thanks.

Anonymous

This is a good idea. I hope you will continue to try new things.

pikapika
>>5158414

It takes a lot of time when the count over 100 you know. I even need a script to rename them in this situation.

Anonymous

I don't know what this is called, but the scene where Ellie does something to Ryder was good. It was great until Ryder got angry and changed mindless. It was better because her mouth was rough. But I felt that the latter part was obvious and just so. Here's my opinion on this. First, you are reusing the poses that have already been used in your works many times over and over again. Why don't you consider making new poses in the future? Second, after she became mindless, her expression changed subtly during sex. Why don't you change her to completely expressionless when she's having sex, just like she's expressionless when she's standing by? On the contrary, why don't you change her expression so that she can temporarily feel strong sexual excitement? (Since female characters can feel sexual excitement even in ordinary sex, it is better that the scenes where female characters only feel sexual excitement are not long.)

Anonymous

Third, if there had been a description of Ryder's usual life at school in the beginning, it would have been better contrasted with what she later became mindless. Fourth, in this work, right in the first explicit scene, she appears completely undressed. Instead, why don't you just take off her skirt, underwear, and shoes at first, and take off more clothes after the footjob scene? In this way, it would have been better if you changed to slowly undressing female characters. This is personal taste, but please let her wear her top fully for some of the explicit scenes. In general, when you create new works, it is better to pay attention to changes and diversity, such as various stories or situations, various costumes, and various facial expressions. Just as you made her mindless while making her sane in this work, you'd better mind the contrast on purpose. I'm very late to write this because I'm lazy, but I hope it helps you a little.