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A followup to yesterday's chapter. I've been rather fond of Bea ever since she was first revealed, and I think you can tell that by the way this story played out. I hope you guys enjoy!

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Erick

I’m gonna guess next post will be fallen trainers or fallen swords

Erick

I’m guess it fine for now…

Kage Tsukino

Somewhat predictable in the way it went, but that's not a bad thing.

Kage Tsukino

I am wondering what the numbers on the Androids mean? How does an Android with the 01 tattoo differ from a 02 for example?

Anonymous

I have a suggestion for you. In explicit scenes, I think it's too simple to hypnotize a female character and then use it only to enable sexual behavior with her and to make her sexually excited. Having sex and her sexually excited reaction is something that happens naturally when ordinary couples just have sex without hypnosis or mind control. If she's hypnotized, I think it's better to use her to show other facial expressions and reactions. For example, when it's normal for her to change her expression because she's sexually excited during sex, there's the opposite of deliberately changing her expression to be expressionless or unresponsive. It wasn't the first thing that came to mind in this work, but I thought the same thing about your other works, and it took me a while to organize it in writing like this.

Anonymous

Still, I think it's a good attempt that she's sane but she's not allowed to move her body on her own. And the sexual representation of this work is also good.

Anonymous

If it's not too late to suggest an idea: minds are constructed by memories, and breaking a mind often means breaking memories physically or mentally. In early dollhouse database series this requires giving stimulation for hours or days; With this hypnosis skill, the subjective time reception might be manipulated, like shrinking the break time to a blink and lengthen each piston move to feel like several seconds (minutes or hours feel like too long.) Eventually her memory would be stuffed solely with this event to a point that she couldn't recall any other things.

Anonymous

These kind of stories are all about domination, and there are several levels of it: physically (like tied up), mentally (hypnotism/mind control), meta-mentally (cognitive hindrance), super-natural (time stop), and maybe few more. Hypnotism is quite versatile because it can sometimes simulate others. So far I think you're doing great on not mixing up different kinds of them, and keeping the skills from becoming over-powered by having limitations (most easily, stamina.) In Bea's case, she was able to fight against the drug that took effect very quickly, so I guess she is physically strong enough to recover from this single exercise. In my personal opinion you would need to apply at least one higher level domination on her to continue the story.