Yor Forger Dialogue (Pixiv Fanbox)

I definitely underestimated how much space the text would take up. I also kind of wrote a bit much but I actually enjoy writing a lot right now. I want to create a strip with a few panels in the near future but havent found the right idea yet. another thing i'm working on bit by bit is an actual manga it also features bondage but is mostly a romance story, let me know if you would like me to post updates on here because i'm currently not really sure if there would be a real interest for it, thats why im only working partly on it. Anyways i hope you like this pic and let me know what you think.