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HELP (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2021-08-13 04:01:29
Edited:
2022-08-15 21:29:29
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Hey everyone, i rarely ever post in public, but since i need a lot of opinions, there we are. If you're only a follower, you may have only seen the thumbnails of that new girl I've been working on for some months now. I've struggled a lot to make her the best i could, found lots and lots of reference (everything legal, don't be nasty) to get all the details of younger females anatomy, tons of things i would have never guessed, but that you start to notice when you look for the tiniest details. I feel that I am finally truly happy with the results, but there may still be some things I didn't notice, some details that you see and I don't because I spent so much time focusing on little things, that I just don't see the big things anymore. So please judge her and tell me everything that you think looks wrong, so I can make her perfect! Thanks everyone in advance!

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Anonymous

The only thing that looks a bit off for me is the toes/feet. But I am not sure if it is supposed to look like that on a child :D

Anonymous

The nipples are a touch big for her age, and the toes are long

Anonymous

the feet are maybe a little bit too big. but otherwise a pretty model

pth
>>2221747

Yea the nipples are gonna change, it's just the way the texture is in daz, but it's not gonna stay this way. Are the toes long? Like did you compare or is that just a feeling?

Anonymous

There appears to be a ridge/trough/marking under the nipple around the pectoral region. I don't know if this is a hold-over from a more mature model but it is unnecessary and strange for how flat things are. The front foot profile looks fine though the ankles are perhaps a smidge too wide, and once brought in a touch perhaps the foot front should also be narrowed by a similar margin. ( The ankles blend too much into the shin at the moment, though foot to ankle proportion appears okay ). The side foot profile seems okay, the foot in the air appears a tad too long but it is curved to hard to tell properly without static side portrait. The foot arch appears fine. Perhaps tone down the pigmentation of the soles, a tiny bit less pink, and a good amount less pale, the under arch shouldn't be too much more pale than her skin, as she is white/pale to begin with. Hands maybe a tiny bit on the small size. All very minor adjustments aside from the chest.

Anonymous
>>2222043

Mental comparison, seen enough images to recognize they look like teenager or adult toes on a child's body

pth
>>2222329

Yea that's from all the different morphs i'm working ith, the many little disgracious lines like the ones under her nipples will me smoothed out in blender later, I'm just trying to make her the best i can in daz before that. The ankles are tricky because it seems that it varies vastly from girl to girl, while some younger girls have those kind of ankles, some others have them looking skinnier and bonier, while the rest of the body doesn't look much different. I agree that the feet look too long now that I stopped focusing on them full close up, i'll change that. The textures will change later, like I said to someone else, the textures aren't final, that's just what i use in daz, but it will look a lot different in blender. Thanks for the insight on the skin color though. Hands used to look too big imo, so i changed them a lot, same for the feet, i spent a long time working fully zoomed in on them, so i may change their scale later to make it better. Thanks a lot for all this help! 😊

Anonymous

Looks like me some what

Rhino

I agree with most of what other's have said. Feet and nipples IMO. Try not to obsess, perfect is a completely subjective term! Perfect to you should be good enough. Honestly, once she is done to your liking I would personally like more HC content from you. Maybe another pay tier or something? Unless you just aren't into HC renders?

pth
>>2223532

Of course, she looked perfect to me because i worked on everything i found didn't look good, but in the end, you need to sleep on it and take a huge step back to see if you missed anything. Other people also have a different point of view, and may have some expertise that I lack, hence why I ask for everyone's opinion of her ;) What do you think of when you're saying hc content, any specific idea?

Anonymous

The nipples have already been touched (bad choice of words...I meant "discussed") but even that looks nice if not accurate. Very lovely! For HC, I'm a fan of the combo of self-pleasure and totally inappropriate clothing. Paired with another model would be plenty fun, too, but then there's all that work to fine-tune another character to her level of yummy. All that time would be better used creating sets with this li'l lovely. :)

pth
>>2233582

Sadly, i never found clothes that i found looked good enough, so it's probable I'll never make my girls wear clothes. Inappropriate clothes are out of the question. Two girls is still possible though.