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場面がちょっと静寂だと思うんだけど···

どうですか?


私が何を追加すればいいのかわかりません···

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Sugar Skull

I think it's really good! I love the confusion and the acceptance in her expression as she stops trying to escape.

Dr.ハロー

いままでにない素晴らしい演出です!

sciflyboy

It's really great. Maybe her right arm needs to embrace him when she closes her eyes? I think that might add to the contrast between that warm scene and her final reality. Also, is it too much work to show the 'fluid level' raise a little in that final scene? I know I'm suggesting more work, but hopefully it helps you get to the vision you want.

frankenstyle

Yes!! she can't escape!!! Monsters will constantly hypnotize her and confuse her... Forever..

frankenstyle

今回の演出は新しいですが··· これがもっとエロになるかはわかりませんねか?

frankenstyle

It's not designed to move her arms.. T^T And it's going to show a description of the arm being tied up and unable to move.

Dr.ハロー

女の子が幸せそうにしてるほど、ギャップでエッチになるかもしれません。

優希

精液含着大量魅药和迷幻药

お茶

とても良いと思います! 場面が変わった際に以前投稿されていた泣き顔(嬉し泣き)になっていたらより背徳感が増しますね

frankenstyle

その部分をうまく表現できたか分かりませんね。 後ほど作品をアップロードしますので、ご鑑賞ください!!