22.06.04 - 働く触手!! (Pixiv Fanbox)

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2022-06-04 04:44:37

Imported:

2022-06

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良さそうに見えますか？ぎこちなく見えますか？

うーん..一応彼女の閉じた目を修正してみます. 何かぎこちない。

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sciflyboy

The bend of the penis is awkward. Maybe have him start further back so the angle stays the same, does that make sense? And I think we need to see her eyes to confirm her expression. With her eyes being hidden I get a certain sense of agony that doesn't sit well with me. In this context I'd rather see an angry expression, for instance, than one of sheer agony. I hope that helps. This is coming along really nicely. Excellent work so far.

2022-06-04 06:18:50

frankenstyle

>>3610290

Hah.... To make the shape of the penis pretty, you have to rotate her, which is impossible. So... I don't know how to solve it.... T^T and... I can't add eyes on head tilted back.... because the artwork need to Hakos's moving, So If I add many layers.... The GIF is not captured correctly, so the workload increases tremendously. I need to reduce number of moving layer.

2022-06-04 06:26:15

Anonymous

Awesome!!... will there be an all the way through like Marnie.

2022-06-04 16:04:25

flax

greaaaaaat work!

2022-06-04 16:39:58

sciflyboy

>>3610314

Okay. I thought maybe you could rotate the penis that's not inside her, so it comes in from further behind her. You choose what's best. I don't want too many layers to disrupt the scene.

2022-06-04 23:14:26

frankenstyle

>>3614432

It's awkward to rotate the penis in that scene. T^T

2022-06-05 01:55:11

frankenstyle

>>3613441

uh, some supporters hate penis all the way through, because looks disgusting. so I don't add the scene.

2022-06-05 01:57:08

frankenstyle

>>3613589

Thank you veeeeeeeryyyyyyy much!! X3