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LITTLENUNScomic54 (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2022-11-02 18:30:36
Edited:
2022-11-03 18:38:13
Imported:
2022-11

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Please let me know if there is any strange English.😊

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Marcel

"Because it stinks", poor duck should probably take a bath. In the first blurry picture there should probably be a comma or a period after "guess", so "Guess, what is this?". (the other "guess" sentences are correct because she says "guess what this is", so it's not a question). And in the panel where she holds the lemon you could also add a comma ("This fruity smell, it must be a lemon"). But this only makes it sound nicer, your version is also correct. Besides those two little nitpicks there are no mistakes! 😊