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為了緩解幽靈鯊的狂亂,並滿足安哲拉對於深海獵人的妄想,凱爾西將研發中的藥物用在了她的身上,但藥物產生了一定的特殊能力…… In order to alleviate the madness of Skadi and satisfy Andreana's delusion about deep-sea hunters, Kal'tsit applied the drug under development to her, but the drug produced certain special abilities……

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Anonymous

想看安哲拉用这能力去搞其他干员!

放開那只蘿莉

說說我看到的劇情,看了兩次才感覺比較搞懂 安哲拉想跟深海獵人貼貼,凱爾希(好蘿的版本我喜歡!)給了她一種藥,吃了變成皮 皮給深海獵人,幽靈鯊穿完給蒂蒂,穿完幽看到興奮撲上去貼貼 又再換幽穿上皮,這次把自己的皮射出來(這時內在應該是安哲拉了)穿上幽靈鯊的皮找蒂蒂,不知道有沒有陷入鯊鯊的狂亂狀態 換安跟蒂蒂貼貼,把她變成皮穿上自慰 最後被凱太后(身材真好)修理

Anonymous

It’s difficult to understand what’s going on as I can’t tell which is the next one I’m supposed to be reading

Anonymous

I cannot Understand which panel I’m supposed to be reading next So it makes it a little difficult and trying to understand the flow of how this chapter goes as I assume I was supposed to read it left to right but it seems like instead of going like with most manga stories or some of the other ones you have produced where it goes from left to right, sometimes this Doujinshi makes it seems like it’s going left down then up to the right then down to that so it makes it seem like it’s zigzagging and so it’s a little difficult to understand the flow of the plot and how to read it properly

kerberus-tsf

Next time, we'll take care of continuities.Try to make it easier to read. And this work has more pages…… Thanks for your advice!

kerberus-tsf

I made a brief description and put it at the end of the page. I hope it can help you :D

Anonymous

就算有说明这个图的顺序还是有点乱啊大大

kerberus-tsf

这次故事的内容比较多,负责分镜的也是另外的编剧,有些些缺乏经验 再有类似的情况我们会去尽量避免的!希望你能看得开心

sam

这分镜也太自由了,要是有台词就好懂一点了,而且安哲拉的尾巴要怎样才能从小穴里出来啊,甚至还能射精,太魔幻了

sam

高情商:阁下就是藤本树亲传弟子吗

anlimer

长度给个好评,有个短篇漫画的样子了,就算分镜实在太混乱,实在看不太懂是个什么情况。我知道不做台词是为了让各国人都能看,但这对分镜的要求是非常高的

kerberus-tsf

这次负责脚本和分镜的编剧稍稍缺乏经验,这样的情况应该不会再发生了 其实每一篇都是有台词预设脚本的,出于制作效率考虑,基本上会忽略对白,有感兴趣的篇目可以在留言区反馈,会改写成小说慢慢放出的_(:з」∠)_

bigK

"Tentacles? I have seen enough hentai to know where this is going" I don't think it's applicable here. I can see that many people said that before me, but i just feel I have to put my 5 cents on the table Story and art is good, but the amount and positioning of panels makes it just too hard to follow along. The best way would be to either make less panels per page or try to keep the way you read them constant like from left to right/right to left and from up to down.

Bismarck_drei

草,看了半天没有看懂是个什么故事,直到翻到最后

Hydronox

Definitely having trouble following the story.

Hydronox

Like for the second panel, who is the guy, why did they put on the suit and bow to him? Why does the nun looking girl go crazy? Are these particular references to any characters? why do her eyes change color if the other girl didnt have eyes like that when she took the suit off? All of it is very confusing to me.

Hydronox

Also what was she holding at the bottom on the first panel? This story was harder to comprehend than any prior one ive seen here, I would just hope that more of them dont start becoming this confusing out of context. Do not want to be rude, I am just voicing my concerns and looking for an explanation for myself.

kerberus-tsf

There is an overview in the introduction This is a small story about the mobile game(Arknights) The characters in it have some unique relationships

kerberus-tsf

In a word, we will make the following works easier to understand Avoid situations that are too complicated If there are more stories, we will try our best to break them down

Anonymous

最喜欢这个了!