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是的~開始準備製作第二集了,主要角色基本差不多,所以只要稍微布置一下場景和一些男性角色就可以開工了。

不過劇情方面…我還在猶豫到底要怎麼發展,大概有兩個方向,一是徹底凌辱,所有劇情都以肉戲為中心。二是注入希望,讓故事變得更多元。

以H漫來說,當然是一更實用,不過米莉婭這個角色,我設計的初衷是比較偏向二的…我想看到她有更多冒險故事,去打一些怪獸,發揮劍與魔法中世紀幻想主題的真正魅力。

其實我自己在找H漫來看時,也根本不在乎劇情,但到自己製作的時候就忍不住一直想加,畢竟單純只做肉戲其實挺無聊的,有時候劇情的部分反而成為我製作的動力,說起來還真挺諷刺的。


第二集的前半段預定會是地牢調教,至於之後的發展,你有什麼想法呢?歡迎討論:^)


That's right~ second episode is preparing. The main characters are basically the same, so just a little bit of setting up the scene and some male characters can start.

But about the plot... I'm still hesitating about how should it go. There are two directions. First is to completely abuse, all the plots are centered on H-scenes. Second is to inject hope, make the story more diverse.

In terms of H-manga, of course, the first is more "practical", but the original intention of my design for the role of Miria is to be more inclined to the second... I want to see her have more adventure stories, fight some monsters, do the sword and magic. The real charm of the medieval fantasy theme.

In fact, when I was looking for H-manga to watch, I didn't care about the plot at all, but when I made it myself, I couldn't help but keep wanting to add it. After all, it's really boring to just do H-scenes, sometimes the plot part becomes my motivation instead, which is quite ironic.


The first half of the second episode is scheduled to be a dungeon training. As for the future development, what do you think? Discussion welcome :^)







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Anonymous

肯定要加些剧情才好营造各种不同的H场景啦,否则费尽心思搭建的中世纪背景确实就有点浪费了。 个人建议:目前的米莉娅感觉有点偏弱,是不是可以考虑一个经典的武侠桥段,在地牢深处遇到将死的奇人传授魔法或者随便什么技艺,解除控制项圈,脱身复仇,开始新的旅程

Anonymous

难得做出这样好的角色,经历更多的事情,展开更多的剧情肯定是更好的。感觉一楼所说的有点意思,也可以做一个带弟弟亡命天涯的剧本,让光头成为一个一直追杀的大BOSS,当然我感觉这样不是很有意思就是了。

Anonymous

很同意你的觀點啊,只專注肉戲輕劇情的話也太無聊了,會少很多感覺。米莉亞的希望就是她的弟弟了,希望這個類似“主教”的人能利用她弟弟做一些blackmail。當然結局我傾向BE哦。

Anonymous

我更希望是那种同人hrpg式的发展,主角会因为战败被敌人干,也会因为胁迫、借金等等原因被各种人凌辱,但是内心始终没有堕落,依然为自己的目的坚持继续冒险……在这个过程中被h的越来越多,也会留下对身心的影响,这些影响又会让她在之后更容易失手战败,或是被抓住把柄胁迫,于是形成一个堕落的循环……越来越惨的凌辱和女主的反抗心、信念、希望的角力,我认为会是一个很有趣的看点

andypandy

The ultimate work would contain BOTH a good plot with repeated hope, defeat and misery for our heroine AND a lot of heavy H-scenes where her body is molested. No easy task for you, I know...

Anonymous

确实不错,即便被怪物流氓乞丐土豪胁迫强迫ooxx,但女主内心一直是强势不屈。

Anonymous

Definitely the second! The reason I was attracted to your work was because you incorporated story into it; without it, it just falls flat into pure porn which is all too common and boring. The good thing about hope is having the win almost in her grasp, only to have it snatched away at the last moment ;) Side note, I'm not sure where you plan to give with her character development but what I found attractive about Miria is she's defiant to the end, no mind-break or enjoying the process which just cheapens her character arc type you've developed — so big thumbs up from me ^^b

pisanto

確實成長也是很重要的要素呢~這主意滿好的,我會想看看有沒有辦法加進去:^)

pisanto

其實我覺得挺有意思的~只是這樣H戲的部分會比較難加入,基本上,太過有趣的劇情有時候甚至是和H衝突的…這真的很難拿捏:^{

pisanto

轉成脅迫線的劇情我也有想過~基本上也是很適合H戲的劇情,但發展的可能就小了些,話說~光頭不是主教是商人啦XD

pisanto

確實~那種HRPG真的很讚,雖然做成漫畫不曉得會不會有一樣的效果,但確實是個好主意:^),我會想想看的

pisanto

Indeed~ it's difficult to master the percent of plot and H-scene, but also is the fun :^), I'll try to figure it out

pisanto

Thanks:^)! I guess that's true, comic need story otherwise porn video can easily outrun it, I do love girl with strong will, mind-break will add some spice but I'll keep the spirit the same :^).

Anonymous

我个人的看法来讲,冲突不可避免,就可以对H的部分求精化,这样不会影响剧情观感,也不影响实用度,就是会比较累……

K_Y

首先期待一下第二部的调教篇! 有些想法三豆大大可以参考,可以在调教时在身上留下一些不可取下的诅咒装备或是不可逆的改造痕迹,这样在后续剧情可以埋下方便于下次被同一伙或是其它反派发现弱点而抓获的梗。 比如但不限于项圈x环x环鞋袜x纹催眠暗示诅咒

pisanto

英雄所見略同:^),嘿嘿嘿,我也有類似的想法,不過還沒決定要怎麼實行

Anonymous

希望作者多加吻戏,着重表现由开始的抗拒到最后的享受的过程~

Anonymous

大佬我有个想法,可以设定成米莉亚有着天生的冒险心和被调教开发完成的肉体,因此调教完成的数月后仍为了冒险的梦想逃了出去,击败强大的怪物成为了小有名气的冒险者,贾曼听闻后每天提心吊胆害怕被报复,某日半夜惊醒发现被绑到调教室中,面前是全副武装的米莉亚,正绝望地闭目等死,但是等来的却是米莉亚自诉压抑不住肉体的渴望,才半夜潜入,献上战利品土下座请求原谅,大喜过望的贾曼靠着米莉亚带来的怪物战利品变得更加富足,并用怪物素材制作的调教刑具对米莉亚进一步进行调教,数月后暂时玩腻了的贾曼却主动放米莉亚离开了,米莉亚为了再次得到宠信顺便满足自己的冒险心,决定挑战更强的怪物。多次循环后(每次都能更新新的冒险故事和调教内容),米莉亚在外界因为丰硕的成果和每隔一段时间都会神秘失踪数月被称为传说中的冒险者,激励了无数新丁;对弟弟来说米莉亚是每次冒险都会待会很多荣耀和金钱,养育自己长大的好姐姐;但是暗地里米莉亚却是离不开贾曼肉棒调教的奴隶,在人们畅想她在何等险地冒险时实际上正在满足贾曼羞耻的要求

pisanto

真是很有創意的走向:^D,激發了我不少靈感,雖然整體應該不會這樣進行,不過有幾點(抑制不住的肉體渴望)和我計畫的是接近的,敬請期待啦:^)

Anonymous

我自己是很喜歡天野雨乃老師的作品,排便就算了,但是要是有妊辰,我覺得會很棒。之前看PTT裏洽舊文章,我自己也覺得如果只是不斷内射,女主角覺得被羞辱但是卻沒有真實相對應的後果,那感覺就沒有那種真正被內射的威脅感。 我覺得皮老師在台詞上來刻劃女主角對於自身的堅持跟身體上的屈辱那個矛盾寫得挺好挺實用的XD,如果能有上面我說的劇情就太棒了~

pisanto

哈哈~但懷孕會讓劇情走向變得極端,基本上都是要接END了才可能出現,目前應該還不會考慮…確實內射的恐懼掌控的好是非常棒,我可能還要再研究研究,感謝建議:^)